Is the explaination of the target audience clear for both ads?
Is the essay well developed?
What do you think I should add or edit in my paper?
Are the describtions of both ads too long and should be reduced?
Could you picture the ads without looking at the pictures?
Is the essay well developed?
What do you think I should add or edit in my paper?
Are the describtions of both ads too long and should be reduced?
Could you picture the ads without looking at the pictures?
1. I feel that it is, you make it very clear that the Ford truck is marketed towards Southern Americans who desire powerful cars and the Toyota is marketed towards those in both the Arab world and really the world in general who are frustrated with high gas prices.
ReplyDelete2. I feel that it is pretty well developed, the phrasing is choppy in a few areas, but that can be easily improved.
3. I think that you could speak about the allusion that the Ford advertisement is making to the story of Noah's Ark in their advertisement. Another proofreading is needed as well.
4. I feel that you could condense your descriptions and lengthen your analyses, but they are both at an alright length.
5. I could, you were very descriptive with your with your descriptions of the advertisement.
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